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After her friends left, Fluttershy went looking for Discord in the EverFree Forest. She eventually found him brooding in a tree.  

"Discord? Please come down," Fluttershy looked up at Discord, laying grumpily on a high tree branch. He rolled over, facing away from her, "Go away. Leave me alone."

Fluttershy raised an eyebrow at him, "Don't make me bring out... The Stare."

Discord rolled his eyes, "You can stare at me all you like. I ain't budging."

Fluttershy sighed and flew up to Discord's resting place to meet his eyes, "Why'd you hit Rainbow before?"

"Why do you think?"

Fluttershy was silent for a while, "It's getting cold out. You're always welcome inside."

"Of course," Discord looked away from her again. Fluttershy followed his gaze, "Are you okay?"

"Hm? Yeah. I'm fine. Just thinking," he glanced at Fluttershy who was still gazing down the path he had been, "May I be left in peace?"

"Oh. Sure," Fluttershy gave him a small, apologetic glance, "I should get out of here anyway...before my mind finds out that I'm in the EverFree forest," she attempted to joke, "You know...'cause if it found out...my body would probably freeze up."

Discord smiled at her, "The forest isn't really that bad. It's actually quite nice once you get used to it. Besides, we're right at the edge of it."

"Uhh...yeah, ok..umm, I'm just gonna go now."

"Okay," Discord turned back and continued to gaze into the shadows.

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Time went by. The minutes turned into hours, the hours turned into days and the days turned into weeks.

Discord stayed out of Fluttershy's house though he'd often be in the Forest and around the small paddocks outside her house or in her garden. Each week Fluttershy loyally brought him a fresh supply of food. Discord used the food carefully, being sure to make it last the whole week. During this time he discovered the comfort of Fluttershy's bridge and slept there each night.

It was the middle of the night that something finally happened. Discord was half asleep when he was suddenly snapped back to conscious by the sound of angry voices and hooves trampling by Ponyville. He lifted his head to see what it was. There was a faint, orange glow hovering just over the rooftops of the town.

Then a few ponies came over the top of a ridge leading from the town to Fluttershy's house, quickly followed by more and more. He could almost swear the whole town was there. Discord jumped to his feet and flew to Fluttershy's bedroom window. He rapped on it loudly, waking Fluttershy who sleepily walked to the window and opened it, "What is it?" she rubbed her eyes.

"Fluttershy," Discord began, feeling vaguely panicked, "We have a problem," he pointed to the mob of angry ponies trampling their way to Fluttershy's home. Her eyes widened, "Get in!" she reached out the window and pulled Discord in.
this chapter is.. really... really.. really... short.


So... I wonder how everypony in PonyVille found out about Discord...

but still... chapter = short.

I CAN'T GET OVER HOW SHORT IT IS! IT'S TOO FREAKING SHORT!!! T DOESN'T FEEL RIGHT!! ohwell...
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once again, credits X3

Characters (C) Lauren Faust
Story (C) me
Edited by :iconsada-pazaki:. And man, is she good, or what? X3
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:icondoctorwholovesthe80s:
The idea that the ponies form a ugly mob complete with the pitchforks and the torches. It would be one cute, ugly mob. LOL
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:iconkillerwilsh:
THE SHORTNESS AHHHH IT BURNS!! But on another note can I haz chezeburgur but if not then Chapter 7? I'd prefer Chapter 7.
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hollow-whispers Apr 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
chapter 7 should have finished the editing stage by now. i'll check, then if it is i'll post it immediately :)

but whilst you're waiting, here. *gives cheezeburger* XD
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:iconkillerwilsh:
*takes burger* Thanks *throws at cat* NOW STOP ASKING FOR CHEESEBURGERS
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kaIoth Mar 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Er, just go to the second chapter or 1st one. I asked if their was more.
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kaIoth Mar 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Sorry about the second chapter post i was derping hard.
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hollow-whispers Mar 20, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
hm? sorry... I don't really know what you're talking about... ^^;
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kaIoth Mar 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
THEIR BETTER BE CHAPTER SEVEN
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